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I wish you happiness
As I point the gun at my head
As I tighten my finger over the trigger
I wish you love
As I shed my last tears
As I think my last thoughts
I wish you peace
As I feel my heart beat quicken
As I feel the chaos still around me
I wish you hope
As I see my dreams shatter
As I feel the despair of my heart
I wish you life
As I give in to my pain
As I greet death
As I point the gun at my head
As I tighten my finger over the trigger
I wish you love
As I shed my last tears
As I think my last thoughts
I wish you peace
As I feel my heart beat quicken
As I feel the chaos still around me
I wish you hope
As I see my dreams shatter
As I feel the despair of my heart
I wish you life
As I give in to my pain
As I greet death
Literature
Suicide
You called me up,
crying,
down the phone,
you said you'd taken some pills,
and didn't want, to die alone.
Is your life,
that messed up,
you had to take steps,
to make it stop?
I cried to you,
to call 999,
you said you couldn't listen,
to voices other than mine.
your voice sounded weak,
fighting for breath,
the silence was noticeable
as if i was deaf.
The streets of heaven,
are already full tonight,
full of souls,
souls of angels,
souls like yours,
souls of people,
whose life ended too soon.
Your death,
has brought nothing but pain,
upon this world.
Literature
Suicide
Bare wrists
Knife in hand.
Closed fists
Tears land..
Time stops.
Thoughts flow.
Knife drops.
Don't go.
Literature
The Suicide
I saw your pain,
and yet I did not try to fix it.
I saw the tears,
and yet I could not dry them.
You talked of your troubles,
and yet I gave no time to listen.
I feel as though I could have saved you, now.
I made no effort at all.
I feel as though I added to your anguish.
I wanted to help, but I didn't know what to do.
I cannot imagine the pain you must have been in,
forgive me for not seeing.
Oh, God, I don't know why I couldn't see!
Blinded by my own petty distractions and excuses
Too busy to save you...
I am so sorry, Dan,
And I pray that you're in heaven as I pray for forgiveness.
Please know that I cried for you once i
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My friend H's sister commited suicide. She left H a very sad yet touching suicide note. This poem is based off the suicide note that H found lying nect to her sisters body along with an empty bottle of Tylenol*.
(*I thought I should come clean about something here, since has been many years and I no longer live any where near these people. Due to the rather small populace of my town, which leads to a lack of privacy, I not only concealed H's name, but also the circumstances of the suicide. Her sister jumped off a cliff. Since it was a huge story on the local news, and the note so personal, I did not want there to be any connection. I feel at this point there wont be a soul out there who'd remember and guess I felt sorta like I was dishonoring her memory by lying about how she died? That is all.)
(*I thought I should come clean about something here, since has been many years and I no longer live any where near these people. Due to the rather small populace of my town, which leads to a lack of privacy, I not only concealed H's name, but also the circumstances of the suicide. Her sister jumped off a cliff. Since it was a huge story on the local news, and the note so personal, I did not want there to be any connection. I feel at this point there wont be a soul out there who'd remember and guess I felt sorta like I was dishonoring her memory by lying about how she died? That is all.)
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This poem is really relatable to me